Can’t describe the turmoil I feel
Open was my heart, my love was real
Never thought we wouldn’t spend the years together
For us, wasn’t a storm I wouldn’t weather
Us- a word never to be used again
See how blind I’ve been
Even now it seems unreal
Didn’t think my heart they’d steal
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This little blue bird will take you to my Twitter page where it will continuously feed you random lines about writing, blogging, and the world inside my head.
***I’m writing a book. If you didn’t get your vote in, do it now!
Great poem!
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Thanks!
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That was really sad. Great poem!
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Thanks! It is sad. π¦
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Beautiful poem!
Check out my blog when u find time: https://teenmemoir.com/
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Love the poem but have a question about “they’d steal.” Has it happened often? Or is it a gender thing and I’m not up to date?
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I didn’t want it to be “he” or “she” because I wanted it to be personal to whoever was reading it. π
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The layout of your blog changed? I don’t remember
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Nope, it’s still the same layout.
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Hey! I love this post. Good work on it.
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Short, rich and full of emotion. I am not a poetry expert, just wrote my first ever on my blog, but I have to say, I loved it.
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Thank you! I’m glad you liked it. I’m not an expert either. I just do it for the fun of it.
Good for you for trying out new things. π
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That’s the main thing, having fun! I’ll be checking your blog out for more poetry and trying writing them here on my blog too, happy writing !
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